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10/21/2015

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Happy Wednesday!! We are halfway through the workweek :) Life is good!! 

We began our Author Study in kindergarten this past Monday, and I wanted to share with you how we got started. I feel very much like we are driving down a highway without a map - an experience that is nerve-wracking and exhilarating at the same time! Not surprisingly, the students are meeting our expectations -  and then some!

We began on Monday with an introduction of our mentor text, The Very Hungry Caterpillar, by Eric Carle. I asked the students to first listen to the story as readers, and then they shared what they liked about the story. Some of their responses included "all of the food the caterpillar ate"; "How beautiful the butterfly was at the end"; and, of course, the part where the caterpillar was big and "fat"!  

I read the book again, this time asking the students to listen and look for the writing and illustration moves that Eric Carle made to help his readers enjoy the book as much as they did. We charted what they noticed. 

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On Tuesday, I read the story again. By this time, the students were beginning to anticipate the repeated phrase, "...but he was still hungry." and joined in as I read. They also got excited when we got to the page where the caterpillar is big and "fat". We did stop and talk a bit about how Eric Carle used that word on purpose so that his readers would giggle and enjoy the story even more. But, we cautioned that the word was only funny because it was used to describe the caterpillar, who had, indeed, gotten fat by eating so much food, just like a caterpillar should do.

After I read the story, we added a list to our Noticings chart of insects, animals, etc., that the students might choose from to write their  own "The Very Hungry..." book. I asked the students to think hard about what animal/insect/etc. they would like to have as the main character of their book, and they each chose one. The writing work for the day was to go back and begin creating (sketching, drawing, and coloring) their main character. Prewriting! We had everything from turtles to ladybugs to sharks to "harantulas"!! The students were so excited, you could feel the energy in the classroom!

Today, we read the story once more, but this time I asked them to pay attention to the structure of the story - Carle's use of the days of the week and the growing number of foods the caterpillar eats as the story progresses. I made a chart and, after the read- aloud, we talked about how the story was put together.

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Finally, we sent the writers back to their seats to begin thinking and sketching what foods their character might eat in their stories. I cautioned them that while we could use Eric Carle's writing as inspiration, we could not copy it.

​I was simply amazed by the work these students did with this assignment. There were ascending lists of numbered foods; there was color; there was humor (ice cream sandwiches, sandwiches without crusts); there was such focus and purpose!! I promise to share some examples on Sunday :)

So, that's where we are. Tomorrow I am going to read a counting book and ask the students to pay close attention to the match between the number of items pictured and the number written in the text. We will then be ready to begin our drafts! Sweet!!

I will chat with you again on Sunday!


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